losing sight

i leaned my body against the cold tile
and traced a heart with my fingertip
i watched as it disappeared in the dampness
following the slightly visible outline of the previous heart
i made another
and i thought to myself
is it really that simple
to lose sight of love
and when you have lost sight
is it just that simple to retrace your steps
and find it once again
i stood there for what seemed like an eternity
and let the hot water beat against my back
until my feet ached
and my mind tired of thinking

Vanessa xoxo

  1. I love the new layout, I’m trying one on myself. I also really enjoyed this piece. This was amazing … and so visual … I could see it and feel it …

  2. Great visual… loved the unspoken flow.

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